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While some of you may
not teach writing exclusively or explicitly, I believe we
share the sometimes anxiety-filled experience of handing
back essays. I know when I began teaching, I was ill
prepared for the emotional, sometimes even hostile responses
my comments and grades evoked. It wasn't long before I
learned how to avoid this unpleasant experience. I began
turning back papers in the last few minutes of class, so I
could exit quickly, not having to spend the class period
getting the stink eyeor worse yet, seeing eyes fill
with tears.
After reflecting on
the pain and indignation surrounding the process of grading
student essays, I have come to realize that most students
see the grading of their writing as a random, subjective,
even fascist act. In order to show my students that the
grades they receive on their final drafts are not based on
whimsy, personality, or ideology, but on specific,
time-tested criteria that all good academic writing
exhibits, I began to share with them the standards I use
when grading their papers. Not surprisingly, when I invited
students to join me on my side of the big desk, they were
grateful to enter a conversation on evaluation from which
they have been historically excluded.
I believe most of us
look to similar evaluative criteria when grading student
essays. An excellent essay must demonstrate a command of the
topic; the argument must be well developed with a clear
analytic focus; the essay must be logically organized and
well supported; the prose must exhibit syntactic fluency and
variety; and the paper must be generally free from errors in
grammar and punctuation.
The idea to have students evaluate their writing projects
came out of my desire to transcend the pain of the grading
process while maintaining rigorous standards. I now require
my students, either through an in-class or homework
exercise, to evaluate their own essays before they turn them
in to me for a final grade.
As a teacher of writing, I have spent the better part of
eight years developing more effective methods for teaching
my students to write with more analytic insight and
syntactic fluency. To date, the self-grading exercise has
proven the most effective means of inviting students to
embrace writing as a process of intellectual discovery and
personal commitment.
I should clarify that I teach writing as a process; this
means that my students usually submit at least a first
complete draft and then a final draft of every major essay
before they receive a final grade. On the day they turn in
their first complete draft (and I clarify that this draft
should be revised and edited and should reflect their best
effort), they engage the critical practice of grading their
own essays. The first time I announce to a class that they
will be grading their papers, I'm greeted with great
enthusiasmthey joke that of course this means they all
get A's. Once the joking has subsided, I explain that the
grade they choose has little bearing on the grade I put on
the essay. Instead, the purpose of the exercise is to create
a focus and lexicon for a dialogic exchange between the
student writers and the instructor grader (me).
This exercise not only allows students to experience grading
their essays, it also enables me to see where we are in
agreement or disagreement about the quality of their
writing. I inform them that their self-evaluation helps me
guide my revision comments because I get a glimpse into how
each student sees his or her own writingits strengths
and weaknesses. When I require students to think critically
through revisions of their own writing, I invite them to
become more independent and more accountable for their
written projects.
After I hand out the rubric, go over the criteria, and turn
the task over to them, the room becomes very quiet. Frankly,
I am still surprised to find that most students invited to
participate in and understand the process of criteria-based
evaluation take the task so seriously.
I explain to my students that the grading rubric I use is
adapted from the scoring guide used by the Education Testing
Service for the CSU English Placement Test. I add that over
the years I have used a number of scoring guides. And while
this one is still in process, I find it offers a clear
delineation of the criteria most college instructors are
looking for when they grade.
Before my students begin the task of evaluating their own
essays, I take plenty of time to discuss each criterion and
category. To identify the specific elements of writing I
look for when evaluating their essays, I begin at the top of
the Scoring Guide.
Essay Scoring
Guide
A=4, B=3, C=2, D=1,
F=0
Command of
Assignment/Topic
To demonstrate a "Command of Assignment/Topic," a student
must show that he or she has addressed all aspects of the
written paper assignment, including the paper length.
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A:
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Addresses
the topic clearly and responds effectively to all
aspects of the task
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B:
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Clearly
addresses the topic but responds to some aspects of
the task more effectively than others
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C:
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Addresses
the topic but may slight some aspects of the
task
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D:
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Distorts or
neglects some aspects of the task
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F:
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Suggests
confusion or an inability to comprehend the
task
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Analytic
Focus and Development
To demonstrate critical thinking a.k.a. "Analytic Focus and
Development," the essay must have a clear, unifying thesis
statement; topic sentences or assertions that connect
logically to that thesis; and paragraphs that thoughtfully
engage the who, what, where, when, how, and why of
analysis.
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A:
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Explores the
issues thoughtfully and in depth
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B:
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Shows some
complexity of thought and development
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C:
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May treat
the subject simplistically or
repetitively
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D:
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Lacks
development, or demonstrates confused
thinking
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F:
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Underdeveloped,
illogical, or confused
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Organization
and Support
The "Organization and
Support" criteria prompt students to consider whether their
paragraphs are in a logical order (dictated by theme or
chronology), whether their transitions are smooth, and
whether their support is credible.
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A:
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Coherently
and logically organized, with ideas supported by
logical reasoning and well-chosen
examples
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B:
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Well
organized and developed, with appropriate reasons
and relevant examples to support ideas
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C:
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Adequately
organized and developed, generally supporting ideas
with reasons and examples
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D:
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Poorly
organized and developed, does not provide adequate
of appropriate details to support ideas
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F:
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Confusing
organization, simplistic generalizations, lacks
relevant support
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Syntactic
Variety and Sentence Structure
To clarify the
definition of "Syntactic Variety and Sentence Structure," I
review examples of different sentence types on the board. To
be sure they understand this important category, I also have
them identify and underline an example of each sentence type
in their essay to show hard evidence of variety or a lack
thereof.
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A:
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Has an
effective, fluent style marked by syntactic variety
(subordination, coordination, verbal phrases . .
.)
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B:
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Displays
some syntactic variety and facility in the use of
language
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C:
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Demonstrates
adequate facility with syntax and
language
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D:
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Inadequate
sentence control or avoids sentence
variety
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F:
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Fails to
display sentence control
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Mechanics,
Usage, and Punctuation
Before they grade their
essays on "Mechanics, Usage, and Punctuation," I give them
an eleventh-hour incentive by telling them that they will
not be graded down for any errors they correct.
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A:
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Generally
free from errors in mechanics, usage, and
punctuation
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B:
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May have a
few errors in mechanics, usage, and
punctuation
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C:
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May have
some errors, but demonstrates a general
understanding of mechanics, usage, and
punctuation
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D:
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Has an
accumulation of errors in mechanics, usage, and
punctuation
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F:
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serious and
persistent errors in mechanics, usage, and
punctuation
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Once we have
collectively discussed and answered any lingering questions
about each of the five criteria, students begin the
individual focused grading exercise. Before class, I write a
series of steps on the board that they are then instructed
to follow.
1. Read your
essay slowly and carefully
2. Underline your thesis statement and examples of
different sentence types
3. Mark, and if possible, fix any errors in usage
4. Choose a letter grade for each of the five
criteria
5. Assign a 4-0 (A-F) to each of the individual
grades
6. Add the five numbers together and divide the total
by five
7. The final number corresponds to the letter grade
When I grade the
student essays, I write margin and end comments. On the back
page of the essay, where the student has already listed his
or her scores for each category, the total score, and the
final grade, I juxtapose my grades. Through this visual map,
students can see easily where we line up in agreement and
where we disagree. This method helps me to cut through the
disagreement and point to the specific area that is holding
the quality of the writing back.
For instance, a student who has always gotten B's on essays
might, out of habit, give herself 3's or B's on each
category. While I might also average the grade out as a B, I
may have given A's for the categories "Command of Topic" and
"Organization" but C's for the categories of "Analytic Focus
and Development" and "Syntactic Variety." The juxtaposed
grading charts enable this student to leave class clearly
knowing what is required to bring her writing to the A
level.
Incorporating the self-grading exercise into the curriculum
has made returning papers a more enjoyable experience. When
returning papers, I no longer face hostile confrontations,
tearful excuses, and the stink eye. Believe it or not, I
have more students than ever coming to my office to discuss
my suggestions for improving their writing, or to confess
that they are not surprised they received low grades because
they really hadn't tried. Students who have been too hard on
themselves gain a little more self-confidence, and students
who have suffered from an inflated view of their own writing
leave somewhat humbled, but with clear suggestions for
improving their writing.
I have used this self-evaluation exercise in developmental
and transfer-level writing classes as well as in upper
division and graduate seminars. Across the board, students
invited to participate in the evaluation of their essays
have learned to take their writing more seriously and to
appreciate the value of specifically-focused, constructive
criticism. I hope you find this self-grading exercise as
helpful and enjoyable as I have.
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Posted January 21, 2001
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